Tuesday, October 16, 2007

I wrote a poem a while ago. Here it is!

The Unfinished Artist

By Sam Lopez

He walks into his room,

his studio,

his escape from life,

to find incomplete paintings on the floor.

A single tree stands in an empty field,

where an enormous forest has yet to arrive.

Where a young couple would be shown dancing together,

a single female silently stands with arms grasping the air.

A giant canvas will one day hold a masterpiece of the final battle between heaven and hell,

but only shows a monstrous flame and a single demon.

He looks up on the wall to admire his only finished painting: an image of two men painted from behind, walking along a single path while conversing with each other. The man on the left in jeans and a t-shirt talks while the other, an old man in a white robe, simply listens.

A self-portrait, his current work, sits on a stand.

An outline of the head is drawn,

with only one ear

and half a nose.

The brown eyes stare back at the Artist,

asking, will I ever be complete,

or forever be a work in progress?

Always

incomplete,

and

never

finished.

That’s it!

The Artist places the canvas on the wall,

realizing that what keeps it unfinished,

finishes it

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You know I love it. Often I feel my writing is not only a single tree, but a single, sketchy tree against a frustrating backdrop of white, or at best, a vague and watercolor background.

Powerfully true!